"Rajnar Vajra - His Hands Pass Like Clouds" - читать интересную книгу автора (Vajra Rajnar)On October 8, 2008, the very night "Team Champ" found the big artifact under
Lake Champlain, I was under the gun again. I'd been tweaking this toothbrush commercial scheduled to be unveiled for the client the next day and had run into a problem I couldn't put my finger on. I suspected it had something to do with the voiceover; we'd originally hired David Hyde Pierce for the role, but he'd had to cancel at the last minute and his replacement lacked David's flawless timing. I liked the commercial's basic concept. The opening was set at ground level in a grand, but alien forest. Suddenly the point of view flies upwards into a pink sky. The "camera" pans downward. The forest is receding through perspective and shiny white patches appear around its edges. Our intention here was for the viewer, for an instant, to think the entire forest is growing in a vast crack in some gargantuan iceberg. But then, as the camera moves even higher, the truth is revealed: the impressive foliage is merely some salad remnants stuck in someone's molar. A dry voice asks, "Ever get the feeling your brush is leaving a little something behind?" Clever, and creepy enough to grip the attention. Yet, as I said, something subtle was wrong. I put the first ten seconds of the piece on "autoloop" and watched and listened to it at least fifty times, feeling more and more uncomfortable and increasingly unsure why. This is the kind of thing that drives ad people nuts. Finally, I ignored the visuals and studied my editing program's virtual VU meters. For no good reason, the Hyde Pierce sound-alike had put a tiny extra stress on the word "behind." Odd, but so what? So I watched the commercial again and froze the picture at the exact way, the damn molar looked very much like a stylized bare ass. Somewhat jarring in a toothbrush commercial. I used my software's automated mixdown to soft-pedal "behind" and used the graphics editor to redact the tooth (luckily this section of the animation was a "cloned" sequence so that redrawing the tooth in one cell changed all three hundred images). Then I watched the ad a few dozen more times before reluctantly e-mailing it to my agency. The file was vast and needed to be sent with redundant "shake" demands to confirm that no information was getting lost in transmission. You don't dare compress any file with so much visual detail. Even by broadband it was going to take at least twenty minutes before the transfer was complete. And I couldn't go to sleep until the baby was safely in bed. With nothing to do for the moment, I leaned back in my chair and caught up with how tense I'd become. My left hand was misbehaving, clenched tightly enough to break a pencil, and my legs were numb. I forced myself to stand up and went for a long walk, all the way to the back door, partly to stretch and partly to find out how cold the night had gotten. But when I saw the clouds glowing faintly from the gibbous moon ... I remembered Uncle Joe and wondered if he was watching the same clouds from his usual haunt at the beach. The idea was ridiculous; it was ten past eleven and surely the man slept _sometime_. Assuming, that is, he was still _alive_ -- no one had mentioned Joe since I'd been back; but then, people tended to take him for granted... |
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