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Subsequently Beren and Land of the Cuilwarthin were
struck out in this position, and Land of the Cuilwarthin re-
entered much further to the East, in the empty lands between
Sirion and Gelion. This was again struck out, in pencil, with
the note 'Lies to the east of this and beyond the Great Lands
of the East and of wild men' (on which see Beren and
Luthien and Great Lands under the Eastward Extension of
the map). In Q (514) the Land of the Dead that Live is in
Assariad (>Ossiriand), 'between the river [Gelion] and the
[Blue] mountains'.

Broseliand This name occurs first in the Lay of Leithian,
with the spelling Broceliand (III. 158-9, 169); BeLeriand
first appears (i.e. as originally typed, not as an emendation
of Broseliand) in Q $13, and in the Lay of Leithian at line
3957. Broseliand occurs also in the note in red ink in the
south-east corner of the map; this is given together with the
later alterations to it at the end of these notes on the south-
ern half.

Celon, River This has not occurred in any text. The course of
Celon is the same as on the later map, the river rising (in the
Eastward Extension of the present map) in Himling.

Cuilwarthin, Land of the See Beren.

Doriath The bounds of Doriath are represented, I think, by
Mindeb, by the dotted line (above 'Beleg and Turin') be-
tween Mindeb and Aros, then by Aros and Sirion to the dot-
ted line encircling 'Doriath beyond Sirion', and so back to
Mind eb.

Doriath beyond Sirion It is said in Q ($13) that the Taiglin
'enters the land of Doriath ere it joins with the great waters
of Sirion'. As a name, 'Doriath beyond Sirion' has only oc-
curred in a note on the MS of the Tale of the Nauglafring
(II. 249).

Duil Rewinion This name of the Hills of the Hunters (also on
the Westward Extension of the map) is not found elsewhere.

Dwarf-road See Aros.

Geleidhian This occurs in the note in the corner of the map
as the Gnomish name of Broseliand. It is found in additions
to Q, $9 (note 2) and $10 (note 15); see also photo insert.

Guarded Plain, The First occurs in the Lay of the Children of
Hurin (III. 88). On the later map the name is written over a
much larger area further to the North-east, and outside the